My aggressive journey to say a few words. (AKA) I'll be saying stuff that won't matter to many of you but it'll ALL mean something to me.
Published on April 15, 2004 By wnx_decoy In Life Journals
You all know the way I usually blog. Well, I thought I'd try to go back to my original way for once just to see if I still can. So, here we go...



This is a poem I wrote in school one day when I was thinking about the great series of books; known as, the Left Behind Series. Well, I personally haven't even read the first one, but I can tell you what happens in the end. God wins! 'Nough said. So, without further distractions...



WHEN HE COMES



When he comes where will you be?



Will you be at the store looking...



Looking for something you want?



Will you be at your friend's house playing...



Playing with something you lust for?



Will you be at the church meditating...



Meditating on him taking you along?



When he comes where will I be?



I will not be at the store looking...



I will not be at my friend's house playing...



I will not be at the church meditating...



I will be in heaven waiting...



waiting for someong like you.









Alright, so I took a chance, if you don't like it that's fine, I just thought I needed to add a little poetry to my life. I used to write quite often and I lost the passion and the paper. Now, I'm left trying to find scraps of old poems I wrote and reading poetry of others. Well, I guess that's what you get but, maybe you understood what I'm talking about in the poem, and that's all I was aiming for.



Go ahead and make comments if you please, but it won't bother me if you don't. Just as long as you read it and knew what I was saying.







Capt. over and out!

Comments
on Apr 15, 2004
I liked it... BRAVO!
on Apr 15, 2004
bravo!

on Apr 15, 2004
Capt~dude you're a poet, and I think you kind of know it! . I only say those words to people I RESPECT as a poet. Dude I didn't know you wrote poetry? I think you need to show us some more of your really cool poems ASAP! This first one is just so awesome to me: It's simply stated (always the best way to do it too~IMO), but carries a very moving and profound message! I like this poem as much as your really cool high school blogs! You better put some more of these cool poems of yours on JU in a hurry, or else I'm gonna be really mad at you! . And you don't wanna get a "MadPoet" mad. That's just too much "madness" for comfort, huh? . But seriously, I was so impressed by this poem dude. Really moving and top notch! Yeah, Captain Cornbread is a poet for real! And he may feel free to quote me on that anytime he wants to do so. Awesome dude!

~MadPoet

P.S. Hey Capt? Have you ever read Charles Bukowski's poems? Really, really cool. And he wrote A LOT of them too. His stuff is kinda like yours? Simply stated, but with a powerful message? And even a dash of beauty thrown in for good measure sometimes. So check his stuff out, k? I mean, if you haven't done it already.....(Oh, I got one of my own poems on here too? It's from a little while back~in the Art section: "Ballad Blue". Go check it out if you wanna, k? Because I'd be curious to see what you think of it, huh?) MP
on Apr 15, 2004
The thing with my poems is that the only ones I can find are old and so I don't know if you all would like the others. That was pretty much the only one I could find that I liked. If you want more though, I guess I could add some of the others and if I decide to start writing new poems I'll be sure to add any of them I can. Thanks for your continued support.

Capt. over and out!
on Apr 15, 2004
Hey Capt.~ Nice poem. I like it. I think you should put more on here. I never would've thought you were such a poet. lol. Yeah man just keep postin them if other people like em. Untill next time.....

~carebear~
on Apr 15, 2004
Thanks carebear. Maybe I should write a few new ones some time. I'll think about it. You just can't go telling people at school about it like I'm a different person because of it ok?

Capt. over and out!
on Apr 18, 2004
This is really good, I didnt know you wrote poetry!

10-4
on Apr 18, 2004
This poem proved to me that you guys don't truly know anything about me really. Not even carebear knew and I consider her a pretty close friend.

Maybe you'll find something else out about me someday.

Capt. over and out!
on Apr 20, 2004
dont worry Capt. I wasn't planning on telling anyone at school. In fact I didn't even think about telling anyone anyways. lol. And I never said that It made you a different person. I feel that it just shows your innerself, which sometimes you show to others and sometimes you don't. that's all im saying. Keep em commin!

~carebear~
on Apr 20, 2004
Oh yeah one more thing womanbeast *cough* I mean Capt. LOL. I did know that I was one of your good friends but I never knew that you consider me as a pretty close friend. But thanx. That means alot to me.

~carebear~